Project about intensive care nurses and technology

Project about intensive care nurses and technology. Project rubrics
Value 20%
Word limit 1500 (excluding references)

Evaluation Items Poor
(1)
Fair
(2)
Good
(3)
Excellent
(4)

Introduction The aim of the essay is clearly stated
Defines the project
States the components
Outlines the arguments to be presented
Body idea are presented, explored, and discussed
Use of literature to support arguments
Balance of arguments
Statement on the future of nursing informatics
Conclusion Clearly Summarises the essay

Flow of essay Ease of read
Grammar Spelling Unsound
(marks lost)
Work limit 10% outside word limit
(marks lost)
References Number <5
5-10
11-20
>20
References are consistently formatted

Introduction:

Aim of the essay is not clearly stated: (1)
Defines the project: (2)
States the components: (3)
Outlines the arguments to be presented: (3)
Body:

Ideas are presented but not explored and discussed thoroughly: (2)
Limited use of literature to support arguments: (2)
Arguments are not balanced: (2)
No statement on the future of nursing informatics: (2)
Conclusion:

Summary of the essay is not clear: (2)
Flow of essay:

The essay is difficult to read due to poor organization and transitions: (1)
Frequent grammar and spelling errors: (1)
Word limit:

The essay is over the word limit: (1)
References:

Fewer than 5 references: (1)
References are inconsistently formatted: (2)
Overall, this project receives a score of 36% (poor). To improve, the essay should clearly state its aim, thoroughly explore and discuss ideas with support from literature, present balanced arguments, and include a statement on the future of nursing informatics. The conclusion should provide a clear summary of the essay. Additionally, the essay should be well-organized with proper transitions, free of grammar and spelling errors, and meet the word limit. Finally, the references should be consistent and meet the minimum requirement.